Final Draft of Research Paper

 Submit the revised draft of your research paper here. Remember that your written content must be 8-10 pages (excluding a cover page and Works Cited pages, 12pt Times New Roman, double-spaced). Use the documentation style for document formatting (including in-text citation and Works Cited page) that is germane to the academic discipline that corresponds to your topic. 

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I added the rubric showing the comments the instructor left and what adjustments he wanted me to make as well. Rubric